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April 21, 2004
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There is nothing new, I enter my room, nothing changes. There is a slight chill in the room, but it is nice to finally find an haven from the heat. Nothing really to do. Old writings lay all over the floor, cans of Mountain Dew are the only real color that can be seen. Walking through the mess, I turn to see someone else in the room. I know this person so little, but even so, I still move closer. My voice seems to be gone, but still there is something I want to say.

There is so much beauty held in that face, body that has no flaws, everything is perfect. Just moments more, my life is filled with happiness, but still do I hold something back. The fear of losing anyone close is always present, that is why I could not tell you as much. I thought I would be able to get over this fear with a simple hug, but nothing in life is ever simple.

Still do I look on, hoping to find answers in your eyes. Nothing. There is so much that I feel but still do I find nothing to talk about. Maybe that was my biggest mistake. With all happiness, there must follow with sorrow. I just did not want it to come so fast. Then there we stood, alone in the rain. It was just something in your voice that shattered my heart. There was nothing I could do and it made me feel weak; weak and alone in the world again.

Running as fast as I could, I found hatred for everything in the world. I hated life, I hated myself, but no matter what I said, I could not hate you. It was something about you, while it hurt to think about it, there was just something about you that I could not hate. I am not sure anymore of what is to be and what is here, but now all I can really hope for is a change...


At a new life
With you there...
:iconholy-night:
This is just something Ihave been working on...Not sure if it is done though...
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:iconhide-chan:
Again, a very beautiful but sad piece. Feels very -real- Excellent work :heart:
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:iconzeeangel:
daamn.. what a poem... i love it...
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:iconexodus-2220:
oh man. You have a beautiful way with words. This piece is soo wonderfully written. and what a way to end it. :clap:
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:iconholy-night:
:) For some reason I am not really sure what my words hold until I am able to look back and see it from a different view. Thanks...
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