deviant art

Deviant Login Shop  Join deviantART for FREE Take the Tour
[x]
Download File
HTML, 908 bytes
more ▶

More from ~Holy-Night

Featured in Groups:

Details

April 20, 2004
908 bytes
Link
Thumb

Statistics

Comments: 4
Favourites: 1 [who?]

Views: 24 (0 today)
Downloads: 13 (0 today)
[x]
Even so, feelings still find their home within me

A life that is lived with no more meaning

I have to notice that everything is to be

Through time and space, I must be seeing

The truth that should do nothing but bring

pain to the heart, chaos to the mind

No longer is it true. that the birds would sing

A love that is lost, a life that in now bind

For now that you are gone, my world is no more

All is lost, never to be found

Your life was without reason, but the pain is still here, nor

but now the pain is leaving, leaving even without a sound

In your eyes everyday said that “I love you”

While you were here my heart always screamed, “I do too”
:iconholy-night:
I dont really have a title for this peice but it is the first sonnet I have done, well since I igured out what a sonnet was... :) Well this is different tring this but it was fun...Hope you enjoy...
Add a Comment:
 
:iconvp-:
mmmm, emotion, feeling, love it
Reply
:iconexodus-2220:
:tears: oh man... thats so incredibly beautiful. Whoever you were in love with must have really been a beautiful person. So much emotion lay within this sonnet, you can almost read between the lines. :wow: Im in so much awe right now... I'm gonna :+fav: this... :lonely: :tears: :cries:
Reply
:iconholy-night:
:hug: Thank you...
Reply
:iconexodus-2220:
:hug: you're very welcome.
Reply
Add a Comment: